
Author: Brooke Fast
Genre: Adult fiction, dystopian fiction, romance, queer themes, BIPOC rep
Publisher: Avon and Harper Voyager
Format: Ebook (NetGalley Copy)
Release Date: March 3rd, 2026
TW: murder, sexual assault, surveillance, death, harm to children, death of children (on page, but not dwelled on), starvation, state oppression, ambush beat downs, attempted rape, incarceration, police/guard brutality
Despite some clunky exposition and shallow worldbuilding at the beginning of the novel, I enjoyed this story. Beware of spoilers, as the romance is prominent here, and the best parts of this book are in Endlock. Check out my final rating below!
But first, the plot: Raven Thorne is a bounty hunter in the city of Dividium, where she is paid to turn in criminals to be locked up in Dividium's prison, Endlock. Endlock is a hunting ground-rich citizens of the city can pay to hunt prisoners and keep their body parts as trophies. (There is a whole industry of taking the teeth from these prisoners and fashioning them into jewelry.) When Raven's brother Jed gets thrown into the prison for punching one of the city's councilors, she resolve to get him out by any means necessary. To that end, she goes to The Collective, a resistance group her parents were a part of. They give her a mission: break a prisoner out of Endlock and the siblings will go with them to the neutral Northern Settlement, away from Dividium. However, a prison guard named Vale takes an interest in Raven. Will this blow her cover? Why does she feel attracted to him? Will Ravenm will be able to survive Endlock?
The characters carry this book. Raven was actually a delight, as she reckons with what she did before coming to Endlock, and learns how to open up in turn. I do appreciate that she is haunted by the people she sent to this terrible place. I appreciate that everyone was standoffish with her or even hate her at the beginning. I also appreciate that Raven doesn't feel like she deserves good things for a while.
I was also here for the side characters. Jed, August and Kit and Yara and Momo make a perfect found family. I like that they are more of a significant part of the book that you would expect, as they keep Raven sane in this prison. I also appreciate the diverse representation of this friend-group, as Kit and Yara are a couple together (and have to deal with realistic expectations and trials of being in a prison) and all of them with the exception of Jed seem to be people of color. I also appreciate that everyone gets a few scenes where their characters shine, and you can tell they have their own lives and dreams outside of the prison. Jed and Raven's bond is very sibling realistic, and I also appreciate that. This makes a later gut punch all the more impactful, which made me cry.
I really appreciate how the romance was done here. Thank fuck this wasn't oppressor/oppressed. (I genuinely hate that trope so much, as it's a terrible outgrowth of 'I can fix him'.) Vale is on side, even if it doesn't seem like it at first.(if a reader He and Raven do have chemistry, which deepens when she is in close proximity with him. (He also does say 'Who did this to you?" but doesn't fly off the handle at the culprit, or get extremely angry, which I appreciate.)
Speaking of 'close proximity', there are explicit sex scenes in this book, that a re woman centered. I appreciate that Vale knows where the clit is, acknowledges the power dynamic between them, and is actively looking for consent. Raven is an active participant in her own pleasure which I also appreciate. As an Ace person, I appreciate that, as the scenes were well written and also tense, as they could be caught at any moment by the other guards of Endlock. (The PIV scenes were fine as well, but as an Ace person, I once again, skimmed over them, but they're competently written fro what they are.)
With all of this good, there is also bad. First, the setting. Dividium as a place is incredibly generic. There are three levels that are 'divided' (Upper, Middle and Lower) and they are going through a famine, which fuels the prison dynamics of Endlock. This setting is only really distinguished by the 'trophy hunting', which makes the setting outside of Endlock feel sketchy. Even Endlock reminds me of the Hunger Games, down to the traps placed later in the book. This will not be a dealbreaker for a lot of readers but I couldn't stop making comparisons in my head. (This in turn made me worry that this was a Young Adult book, which considering the level of erotic and explicit scenes, it shouldn't be.)
Second, the expository prose at the beginning of the book almost made me stop reading. Raven starts the book pursuing a criminal, and what should be a thrilling chase scene gets stopped dead by expository prose barely related to the task at hand. This stops after the first 20 or so pages, but it was so jarring that it took me out of the story very quickly.
However, I am glad I stuck through it. Mind the trigger warnings, and if you could get through a really clunky first chapter, you will enjoy this book. I will be looking for a sequel, and hoping the author writes one.
Thanks to Avon and Harper Voyager and Netgalley for the ARC!
Final Rating: 3.75 (rounded up to 4) out of 5 stars
Drink Paring: Dark roast da hong pao in a dark room
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